This is a crit/feedback post for Shimotsuki Tochi, aka Iwata Karen the 4th! I’ve been curious lately as to if there’s anything I can do to improve upon my writing, if there is anything I can do, and so this post is for that purpose! (though my ask box is open, as well, and there’s always fanmail if you wish to keep it private.)
So let’s hear it! Do you think I could do anything different with Tochi? Is there anything you dislike about her as a character? Do you agree with who she succeeded? Dislike the real Iwata Karen? Think Tochi should have succeeded someone else? Someone… more popular and well-known? That your character would want to interact with? Or perhaps you think someone else should have been more suited to succeed that name?
While there’s nothing I can do about succession at this point (short of working out a retcon, which I also don’t think is possible at this point), I’d really like to know if there’s anything I can do to make playing with Tochi more fun and interesting!
So, let’s hear it! Thoughts, questions, "I don’t like you, Karen-mun, get out"???
//outofjuju: Personally, I think you’re doing a great job! I don’t follow the original Karen much (not a fan, but I don’t dislike her…More like she’s just another member of AKB for me) so I can’t say whether or not Tochi is like her, but you’re clearly one of the more experience RPers in the group. Keep up the awesome work!